tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4053010737997818646.post4578850579684726975..comments2015-09-19T04:28:41.594-07:00Comments on Olivia bs blog: WRITING PORTFOLIO SAMPLEOlivia & Yogi's Blog!http://www.blogger.com/profile/17798517642522935375noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4053010737997818646.post-3978726740166262762015-06-12T17:42:50.441-07:002015-06-12T17:42:50.441-07:00Olivia, I am really impressed with the strong unde...Olivia, I am really impressed with the strong understanding you have of complex sentences. You have utilised these very well in your story and as a result, it makes for an easy read. You next step is to make the dialogue between your characters more interesting.Troy Duckworthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05604395648875507690noreply@blogger.com