Olivia bs blog
Monday, 10 November 2014
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Goal: language features
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TEACHERS VOICE
Teachers voice
Creative writing... Goal: language features
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MOUSE!!
MOUSE!
Goal: generating ideas
Feedback & Feedforward: You have done a great job of using descriptive words. Also I love the use of onamatapaia. Maybe you could use some smilies and metaphors.
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