Athletics Goals

These are my athletics goals. :)

Radio Station Reflection

This is my reflection for the radio station. 8001/listen. Tune in to hear about this awesome radio station news, story's and comps

Math prove it!

My goal is to add up through ten.

I made a showme about one of my questions in R2. Please enjoy!

http://www.showme.com/sh/?h=8kTq12G

WALT: Add up through ten to solve math problems.

Self feedback: I think that I did well on my speech in the showme.

Self feedforward: I think I can do better focus in the video because I was fighting and getting my words mixed up! 

Pangram

A Pangram is a sentence that has all the letters of the alpherbet.

WALT: Make a Pangram as short as we possibly can. ( still having All the letters of the alpherbet.

In our writing class with troy, we had to get in a pair or a group and make a Pangram. Me and Emma came first in the shortest Pangram coming in with a totel of 51 letters.

Here is our Pangram

LAZY FROGS JAM TO THE MUSIC OF QUICK RED PYTHON VIEWING BOXES.

Feedback/Feedforward: nice

Shrinkage

Shrinkage summary.

WALT: summarise a story. :)

Pippa is a nice girl. She was desperate to join in friendships with the " cool kids" . So she was presured to do a wrong thing. Shoplift. She didn't want to but Pippa did anyway. Kylie was the " head" of the cool girls so to speak. She was the one to force Pippa to do this awful thing.

Pippa went in to the shop and browsed the shelves for something small, something easy to stuff into her pocket or hold it in her hand.

But what she didn't know was the shopkeeper saw everything Pippa was doing. Pippa walked slowly to the door, hoping to get out. She looked around and Kylie and the gang had vanished.

She got a fright when a hand touched her shoulder. She heaved it away because she thought it was Kylie being nasty.

Then the hand grew tighter. Pippa found out it was the owner of the shop. She was in trouble!

The lady at the front desk said the girls outside have stollen before so she new something was up. Pippa was sad. Very sad. She stole, cherry lip gloss.

Choices: 

* Pippa could of refused.

* Pippa could of told the shopkeeper what was going on.

* Pippa could of secretly paid for it.

* Pippa could of walked away as soon as she heard what she was going to do.

* Pippa should of said " that's wrong!"

 

Two stars in a wish

End of term evaluation

Inquiry with nic :)

WALT Develop ideas, skills and concepts in drama

1. Focus - become the character, placement, patience. :)

2. Accept Ideas and build on them :)

3. Levels - make it interesting for the viewer :)

4. Space - balanced, using a mixture of all the space, don’t bunch up :)

5. Finish on time :)

6. Be Spontaneous :)

7. Centre stage - main idea is always in this position. :|

8. Contribute and participate. :|

:) - there

:| - almost there

:( - not there

ECG with Nic!

I thinked back over my learning. I used these mechanisms to reflect on my inquiry learning. 

Hope you enjoy our video.       

http://tinyurl.com/lk7or9e

Writing portfolio sample T3

WALT:  Entertain

My writing goal this term was to use precise and technical language.

SUCCESS CRITERIA:I have used a range of precise vocabulary to communicate meaning.

TASK: craft a free-choice piece of writing that shows how I am developing my goal

Eventually, we came to the top of the red spiral stairs. And there we were, squished into a small dark room. The slobber runs down from Crystal’s mouth to my cheek. The wind flowing through the cracks enough to push her bad breath up my nose. It was a rather unsavoury place to be.

At the end of the room, in a dome, was the dog stone. It's majestic faint blue glow made just an inch of the room light up. Suddenly the lights flicked on. And there, standing right in front of us, were Fang and Shard and Fluffy. Evil doctor fluffy. " well who do we have here" he said" we've been caught by a Pomeranian " I whispered to crystal. " Fang, Shard. GET THEM!!!!" He barked. The guards lunged towards us. We dodged them and sprinted for the dome. 

I broke the glass and snatched the dog stone. I shoved it into my pocket. 

"NO!" He shouted. " you'll pay for this!, all investigators will pay!!!" He howled. 

Evaluation

How has your writing has improved this term? It has I proved heaps because of my juicy words. My writing pops cause it is full with my beautiful descriptive language. My family in outages me to right more so I keep on trying and trying.

The part of my story I am most proud of is….because… when the detectives clime into the room and they are squished. Then it says ( the slobber runs down her mouth to my cheek.) then it says ( the wind flowing through the cracks enough to push her bad breath up my nose.)

Next time, what is a goal you can work towards? My precise language. I'm getting better and it's my goal but I can still work on it in some of my sentences.

Feedback/Feedforward:great job, I loved your descriptive language it really pulled me in to the story,next time I think you could use less search in your writing. Niamh :) 

WRITING IS AWESOME!!!!