Camp: Glow-Worms
The walls were speckled with lights. Darkness ahead swallowed the light of my torch and I heard the wind whistle softly in time with a flutter of leaves. The glowing lights were like little beady eye's staring down at me. A river of anxiousness trickled down my spine like a shower of rain.
I switched off my torch swiftly walking into the darkness. It was black. Pitch black. All I could see was the beautiful swamp blue lights of tiny creatures called Glow-Worms.
Finally my night vision blew off some steam. But I'm sorry to say it played a trick on me. I thought I saw a hole so as I stepped over the mysterious hole I actually fall into one!
I squeezed my foot out. Ouch!
When I got to the end I was amazed.It was a wonderful sight to see. " The eyes of the hidden forest" says Ben Glow-Worms are very mysterious when it comes to its personality, form and it's life style.
The End
By Olivia B
Olivia, this is beautiful! Well done! You should be proud of this piece of writing!
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