This competition was held on the 3rd of July to the 5th of July in Austria......
http://tinyurl.com/pyd6twn <------- This is the Video!!!! <3 ( it didn't let me imbed :( )
Big idea: At first I didn't know how to summarise properly but since I have been going to the work shops I have made a big amount of progress in how to summarise the main event if it's in a story, an article or in this case an event. During summarising activities, I always struggled to get small bits of writing out of a big story!
Feedback and feedforward: I love your Body Painting Report. You spoke nice and clear. You completed that task thoroughly and I was very interested in hearing what you had to say about Body Painting. I think you might need to put a few more pictures on so that visual learners are interested to. I love your video. Great Job! Rosalind :}
Evaluation: I think I did a great job on speaking clearly and speaking from the heart at some points. I also liked the way we used the sound affects and pictures they really added a little something to the video. I think, I personally maybe even rileigh struggled with getting the words right so that it would look like we are real reporters not some kids ready from a book. Overall we did an outstanding job! :}
Olivia, you never fail to amaze me at your creativity! I love the way you speak so naturally in front of the camera, a potential career path for you maybe? It is tough for me to find something for you to improve on as it is a pretty excellent sample. Maybe the lighting through the window wasn't the best choice as it makes you guys hard to see.
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