Monday 10 November 2014

DOG INVESTIGATORS

Goal: language features

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TEACHERS VOICE

Teachers voice

Creative writing... Goal: language features





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MOUSE!!

MOUSE!

Goal: generating ideas



Feedback & Feedforward: You have done a great job of using descriptive words. Also I love the use of onamatapaia. Maybe you could use some smilies and metaphors.