Wednesday, 15 October 2014


Shrinkage summary.

WALT: summarise a story. :)

Pippa is a nice girl. She was desperate to join in friendships with the " cool kids" . So she was presured to do a wrong thing. Shoplift. She didn't want to but Pippa did anyway. Kylie was the " head" of the cool girls so to speak. She was the one to force Pippa to do this awful thing.
Pippa went in to the shop and browsed the shelves for something small, something easy to stuff into her pocket or hold it in her hand.
But what she didn't know was the shopkeeper saw everything Pippa was doing. Pippa walked slowly to the door, hoping to get out. She looked around and Kylie and the gang had vanished.
She got a fright when a hand touched her shoulder. She heaved it away because she thought it was Kylie being nasty.
Then the hand grew tighter. Pippa found out it was the owner of the shop. She was in trouble!
The lady at the front desk said the girls outside have stollen before so she new something was up. Pippa was sad. Very sad. She stole, cherry lip gloss.

* Pippa could of refused.
* Pippa could of told the shopkeeper what was going on.
* Pippa could of secretly paid for it.
* Pippa could of walked away as soon as she heard what she was going to do.
* Pippa should of said " that's wrong!"


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